Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Effective Writing

The clock struck 8.00 and off I went ready to learn. But as I headed out the door the wind came and  buffeted me. My teeth started clicking and my body started shaking rubbing my hands on me to make me warm.  


As I took a step out the door I felt the freezing cold wind come in. "Siiizzzzzz" I said as I started taking steps outside. My lips changed from normal to purple and my skin from natural to GOOSEBUMPS! I was half way there but I couldn't bare it anymore it was to cold.  

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