Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Show Not Tell!

“Hurry up and go to bed Cara it is really late.” commanded mum. I could hear my dad fast asleep snoring. I opened my bedroom door and could feel the cold breeze so I quickly ran and closed the curtains and then tucked myself into my bed. As I layed down the moonlight shone into my room through my curtains. I saw shadows on my wall of the branchless trees

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