Monday 28 July 2014

Complex Sentences

As the diver balanced she stood steady with focus as she was about to begin.

As the crowd started cheering the divers confidence started to build up, as she balanced with focus in her mind.

Before the diver balanced, with perfect control as she stood up tall and proud she was waiting to do her best clean entry.

As the diver was walking to the platform the crowd was going wild as she  balanced herself, as the time has finally come.



As the diver was walking to the platform the crowd was going wild. She  balanced herself, as the time finally came for her to begin. She controlled herself to jump and as she was up in the air she started with somersaults then changed it to some twist and turns. In a quarter of a fraction she started coming down. Perfectly positioned herself to finish it off with a clean entry.




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