Wednesday, 17 October 2012

My Narrative

Once upon a time a girl named Stella Thompson went to the shops to buy some milk for her and her mum. She walked all the way from home to the shops. It was pretty far.

Stella felt her stomach grumbling. She was so hungry 
because she has not ate anything for 2 hours that instead of buying a milk she brought chips,and wasted her hole money. Then she walked home and thought about how angry her mum will be.

She finally got home “Where’s the milk” asked her mum. Stella saw the look on her mum’s face and ran out of the house. She soon got so worried  that she was crazy. She was running around asking people for money.

Stella was so tired and that she went home and told the truth and her mum understood her because she has not ate anything for 2 hours. But her mum was happy that  she told her the truth. Then they lived happily ever after and had a happy family.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Quasia! I really enjoyed reading your narrative! You was need to go back and edit with a buddy and with me before you publish!

    Great ideas though!

    Miss Ouano