Friday, 28 September 2012

My Narrative

Once upon time there were two girls named Josephine and Thea playing on the Point England Beach with sand trying to make a castle. They got bored and sore all the other kids in the water having fun,so they asked themselves “Should we go in the water and play or just stay and try to make a castle?”.

While Josephine was still asking herself Thea just ran with happiness in the water. She ran and splashed in and started to have lots of fun. Then Josephine saw her running in and thought that she was not listening to her. So she did the same.

While they were having fun they saw something blue moving in the water they thought it was just a blue shirt but then they moved closer and saw it was a SHARK!! So Theia and Josephine tried to swim fast as they could so they cannot get bitten.

Theia finally got out of the water and on the sand but she was worried, because Josephine was still in the water. But it was a relief because Thea was about to shout for help but then Josephine came out of the water just in time.  
Then they got changed and went home and on there way home they had some ice-cream. Then they were happy and never ever came back to Point England Beach.   


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