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Thursday, 3 December 2015

Beginning Sentence Correction 1

Beginning Sentence Correction 1


Directions: Correct the errors in the following sentences. Be sure to rewrite the sentence just like the example.


Example: I are very happy.  
I am very happy.


1. Candy taste sweet.  
Candy tastes sweet.  


2. I gonna get a new cat.
   I’m gonna get a new cat.


3. she like dogs.  are u sure
   She likes dogs. Are u sure?


4. Me favorite color is red.  
  My favorite color is red.  


5. I  happy now.  
  I’m happy now.  


6. What time it is?  
   What time is it?  


7.  My head hurt.
   My head hurts.


8. When we gonna eat?
   When are we gonna eat?


9. He don’t like vegetables.
   He doesn't like vegetables.


10. Me favorite color are blue.
     My favorite color is blue.


11. she does her homework every night.
    She does her homework every night.

12. I leaving now.  
I’m leaving now.

13.  I go now.
      I’m going now.


14. I want three egg.
     I want three eggs.


15. We are learning english.
     We are learning english.


16. I have too cats
    I have two cats


17. You chair is red.
     Your chair is red.
18. I no have time.
   I have no time.

Pourquoi Tale.

Why does a Butterfly have nothing to do with butter?
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Begins with an egg.
Underneath the shell is a caterpillar.
Teeth to chew through and come out of a shell.
Trying to eat a lot of plant.
Each time it grows it sheds it’s skin.
Reaches a spot on a plant to make a chrysalis.
Forms wings and antennae
Leaves the chrysalis as a butterfly
Young caterpillar is gone now it is a butterfly.


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One lovely day a butterfly was flying elegantly around a local farm. That butterfly would always get anilled (Animal Bullying). He would get asked from animals excipally animals who produced butter, why are you called Butter fly when you have nothing to do with butter?

The poor butterfly would always wonder why? One day a bee came flying by and told that butterfly that the reason its name is butterfly was because back back back flyes swam in a lake of butter. One fly drowned and then appeared up as a beautiful fly with big wings. That day everyone called that a butterfly. Now flyes swim in the lake of butter to become a butterfly.

Article - Letter from the Bully!

Living a life experiencing bullying became an everyday routine to person named Chad Michael Morissette. Back in the day when he attended Junior High, he became a victim of bullying. About 5-7 boys from the school football team would torment him each day for the the whole school year.


He says the reasons why this took action was because he has same gender love relationship and also because he was small and bullied for all possible reasons. Now at the age of 34 he has moved on from that horrible nightmare.


Having been bullied in the past really affected his life in a way that he had all this but not just him but also one of the bullies. 20 years after from being a part of bullying he had stopped thinking about it.   
Scrolling through facebook one day a notification popped up. He received a message, it said something like this......


Hey Chad,
I was recently talking with my 10 year old daughter about bullies. She asked me if I ever bullied anyone and sadly I had to say yes. What came to mind was how mean I was to you when we were in Jr. High. I want to apologise. If we lived in the same state I would apologise face to face. I don’t know if you remember, but I do and i’m sorry.
- Bully

Chad found the message touching and moving. It brought up a subject he has thought of in quit a long time. He accepted the apology saying something like this...


Thank you for your apology. I was quite moved by it, it even brang tears to my eyes knowing that you really don’t want to be part in the bullying scene anymore. Back when we were in Junior High out of all the other 5-7 boys you are the only one who apologised. It’s amazing what 20 years and children can do to us, no? I hope you can be an amazing role model to your daughter and when you see bullying you stand up to it. Have a great!
- Chad.

It goes to show that it is never too late to ask for forgiveness.

Tuesday, 18 March 2014

My Audioboo Recording!!

This is a picture of my writing based on the topic Show Not Tell!! I hope you enjoy it and if you are willing to know why I used Audio boo is because it is a really fun way to make you audience listen to what you want to say and also your story's .
And this is a picture of my story on my book. Thank You!!

listen to ‘Quasia's Show not Tell’ on Audioboo