A.F.L Effective Writing.

On a normal not perfect Wednesday when the clock struck 9.40 am off we went walking to the hall getting ready for A.F.L. A.F.L. means (Aussie Football League). Each week we learn at least 2 or more skills in our A.F.L. section.

Walking in, the footballs that were laying on the ground caught my attention. I knew we were going to have fun and some people would eventually get sweaty, and when I say sweaty I mean really sweaty just like they have just finished having a shower. And that was meaning boys.

The skills we have learned was,

1. Speckie

2. Handball

3. The Bounce

4. Ruck

5. Chest Mark

6. Hand Mark.

After we played a game. We had to be splited up  into two groups called Rats and Rabbits. Then it got splited  again into now on four sides. They were still Rats and Rabbits. On one side Rabbits started with two footballs and on the other side Rats  started with the ball. With had to work as a team to eliminate the other team. We had to use the skill Handball. Unfortunately Rabbits lost by 1 under and Rats won!! A.F.L. has been so fun this term. We still have one more section to go but it will be amazing. :)

Analyse Writing!

This is a presentation about analyzing my writing.

My Term 2 Writing Sample :)

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As the wind was howling and rain drops we falling the clock struck 4.15 pm and off the Pt England Panthers went to start their game. My sister Glennes was playing in the first half as W.D (Wing Defence). Well my cousin Sheena was sub on the first half just encouraging her team mates and watching and waiting for her time to come.

The siren rang and the game has started. Their appointed started with the ball. When the whistle was blown everyone started coming forward and shouting “ Here, Here Me, Me!” Well me and my other sister Marilyn was just eating hot chips and watching. .

The appointed finish the first half with 5 to nil. The Panthers coach said to them like this ‘’ You girls need to spread out and get some goal in OKAY.” The siren went on again but this time my cousin Sheena went on now well my sister Glennes was having a break. Sheen went on play G.A (Goal Attack).

The umpire blew the whistle but this time the Panthers started the game having the ball first. Panthers went up to the centre and started calling for the ball. The Pt England centre quickly passed it to the free person which was Sheena (Goal Attack). The Sheena passed it to WA and the off it went to GS and back to Sheena. Sheena shoot'd and it went in. Now on the point paper it was 5 to 1.. 4 minutes passed and Sheen scored another 5 shots. The along came another 4 from Sheena again. The Panthers were really going hard and making a lot of improvement in the second half. 2 more minutes were left and the panthers were going for another goal but unfortunately the other team stole the ball and had the last goal of the game.

The finishing siren went on and the Panthers lost by 1 point. The score of the game was 10 to 9. It was a strong comeback in the second half from the Panthers. The Panther tried their best! :)

My Homemade Chocolate chip Cookies.

One day I felt bored after school just watching television so I just started looking around and as I was looking I saw a piece of paper. I thought to myself I could just draw but when I looked closely it was a recipe to make Chocolate Chip Cookies.

So I read the ingredients and look around in the kitchen to see if had any of them. After a while I found every ingredients that I needed.

So then I started baking. After a whole lot of baking of it went to the oven. When It was ready, of we went and enjoyed the lovely cookies.

Visit next time if you want to know the ingredients. Thank You :)

The Whispering Giant!

This is my presentation about the Wellington Town Hall Organ. I hope you enjoy!

Irene Van Dyk & Fifa World Cup (Weekly Quiz)

1. Irene Van Dyk known as one of the best Silver Fern netball players. She plays as Goal Shoot & Goal Attack. She has a husband and one kid, a daughter. She is an amazing example for those girls or boys you know who wants to grow up and play netball. She has lately shared that she has retired from netball that is really sad. But we knew one moment it will come. 


2. Did you know that the FiFa World Cup is coming. The national sport in that world cup is Soccer. There are teams like Brazil, Portugal and Argentina and etc. It is held in the country of Brazil. I hope Brazil wins! I love sports and this world cup is going to be good for people who also loves sports like me. 

My book Review

Book Title: School Journal (Shrimps)	Author: Alan Bagnall
Reviewer: Quasia Class 4	Grand total of books read this year: 4
Book Genre: (Highlight) Fiction Science fiction Drama Romance Mystery Horror Comedy Series Fantasy Other (state) Non-Fiction Biographies/Autobiographies Historical Instructional Other (state)	Insert photo of book cover here:
Reading Level: Easy Medium Advanced	Rating: (Leave how many stars you rate it.) ✩✩✩✩✩
Review: It's a good book to learn about shrimps.	Excerpt:  Suddenly a bully breaks up a group. Shrimps flick about or loop the loop.

Gangnam Style (Weekly Quiz)!

Gangnam style is a Korean song written by a amazing song write named PSY. But did you know that his real name is actually Parke Jae-Sang. And his song I mentioned earlier Gangnam Style was one of a big world's hit on the music history.

Gangnam style for me is a song the is catchy and really makes you get up and that. It makes you feel alive. But can you do the Gangnam Style leave me some feedback and let me know!

Effective Writing

The clock struck 8.00 and off I went ready to learn. But as I headed out the door the wind came and  buffeted me. My teeth started clicking and my body started shaking rubbing my hands on me to make me warm.  

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As I took a step out the door I felt the freezing cold wind come in. "Siiizzzzzz" I said as I started taking steps outside. My lips changed from normal to purple and my skin from natural to GOOSEBUMPS! I was half way there but I couldn't bare it anymore it was to cold.  

Quizlet!

Quizlet is a website we learn about different words and what it means. Well the one I have done was the Echolocation one. This is a picture of my high score on the race category. Try Quizlet out and try and beat my high score. Thank You!